Tell Stories That Make Performance Personal
Start with a pain point—stifling afternoons, glare-soaked desks, rising utility strain. Then reveal the turning point: daylight modeling, exterior shading, and demand-controlled ventilation. Close on outcomes people feel daily. Invite readers to comment with a ‘before’ they want transformed next.
Tell Stories That Make Performance Personal
One school’s librarian joked the new skylights made overdue books return sooner, because students lingered longer. Anecdotes like this turn lux levels into smiles and stories. Ask your audience for small, memorable moments their teams witnessed after occupancy, and weave them into your copy.
